This was the first flyers I designed assets for. I was looking for pngs with a sketchy handmade vibe and couldn’t find any. I made music notes and suns on my 7.9in Ipad mini in Procreate. I see continued improvement in this flyer in vision and execution, but let’s get on to the design critiques.
Right off the bat, the alignment kinda sucks. The title section needs to be moved down and one of the words is obscured by a music note. I am pretty okay with all the fonts, but the sketchy pencilish one is on the border of working and not working for this. This was a dance for the school kids, so everything was supposed to look messy and bright, but in some aspects, it’s too messy. A sun and “School’s Out” are the same color and too close. I am weirded out by the lack of drop shadow in some places.